Good chapter. I sympathize with Edur. Poor guy. Loved the scene with Lupe. Can't wait for them (him) to meet Bryony again..! Leidolf and Alis are a very good couple (as in their relationship). Love 'em to bits. :)Keep on writing!

Whee! It's getting good... Are you a bibliophile too? (one who loves books)

great chapter! get lupe's instincts to be true son..would be incredibly nice. lol. but yes, lovely, lovely. UPDATE AGAIN! - mwa

It was great. I liked learning more about Edur. Hopefully we'll get some actions with the wolves soon. I look forward to them meeting up with Bryony again.

Finally another chapter! But it was worth the wait. I love Cadeym. I think his my favorite, just because he doesn't fit the sterotype of how a king should act. Loking forward to another chapter!

yes. another chapter woot! I'm glad we are finfing out what is going on with the other characters. and learning about dymphna's brother was interesting. there's lots of stuff that is still yet to happen can't wait to see where you lead the characters next.

Nice chapter. I still stand by my theory that this should be made into a movie. Well you receive no complents from me, except that you should update soon! (which really isn't a complent)

omg! ok well that whole chapter i was worrying about an entire army coming after her but i guess that wasnt it! i love the fact that she has that much honor, i would have killed them all! ok well hurry and update!

I like this story. You went to a lot of trouble to make characters that seem "real," instead of using alot of cardboard cutouts and cliche characters. You deserve many more reviews. This is a very unique and interesting story and you should look into publishing it when it is finished. UPDATE SOON! :D

no! i see a pattern here. you're not gonna make the king and Byrony fall in love are u ? thats just not right... anyeways i luv your story. keep writing!

Keep updating! I love this story. And whoever doesn't like Caderyn and Dymphna can shove it. And when does Lupe come back in to play?

Roel's kinda cool. I mean, he annoys me, but the bit where he hit the Prince with the staff... T'was kind of amusing. P

Ah, and Bryony is so awesome. You know, just generally! P

Good chapter. I don't quite get the point of what they did (except to make the king a bit scared), but good none the less. I like the fact that it was Roel who smashed the Prince's nose. :DKeep it coming! :)

This one's an amusing chapter

*wipes forhead* wow, that's a lot of chapters to read! lol. Well, I think the story completly rocks and should be made in either a book or movie. Love how you write and can't wait for the next chapter!