that was really good, and yes, I think it was effective, but it's one of those things that works for a short period, but not for prolonged pieces (aka I wouldn't write a whole book or anything in it :D ). Anyway, it will be interesting to see what happens :D

I like this story so far, but I am not in harmony with the wolf having a shirt...and the wolves not being human but bearing a staff and walking on two feet...yeah it's not entirely making sense...but maybe I'll get it later.

I see about the Wolf names. You should have kept Ralph as Radulf or whatever though. It sounds more exotic. (:

And I don't really like either Cadeyrn, nor Dymphna. I really dislike Dymphna. I don't know why, really. Guess it's because she seems like the typical "Run away from unwanted marriage" sort of girl. Helpless and all that shit.

I'm also confused by all the names. It has been a long time since I'd read this. Is there an easy way to recap?

Cadeyrn and Dymphna get married. Duh. P

But I love it! I love it, I love it, I love it! I always knew they should get together... ; Okay, maybe not...

Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next. *wants more of Lupe* P

from fawny

That was a rather unexpected spur of the moment thing having them to get married but i think it will work well for the story. I think it is sad that Perkins lost his memory i have know i dea where that will lead you. What is happening back with the wolves. will any of them come to suport Bryony with her cause? more please.

arg hurry and update! but i seriously do wonder what she would have been like if she had grown up no a Wolf? maybe the Wolf blood in her would have still made her different and maybe not. . . The world amy never know. . .

not much happening... ok, so perkin has amnesia..i've never been too bothered with perking, however, it is interesting. but as always, i want lupe. D and i like the idea of the wedding between cadeyrn and dymphna. its interesting. aargh! again, that word! but anyways, love your story as usual and update - mwa!

The wedding thing wa kind of sudden but I wonder if that was what it was leading to, so it didn't surprise me that much. It's about time though. When are Lupe and Bryony going to meet again? I'm waiting for that.

Glad you updated. Poor Perkin was so sweet in an old man kind of way-such a contrast! Caedyrn's decision doesn't seem like a wise one-much too impetuous.

Alas, another lovely chapter from you. You make my day. :)Hm... So they'll get married... A bit rash, since he's king and all. Oh well, maybe he just can't resist her anymore! :DPerkin sure was a bonny weird man without his memory... :S Kelden is seriously getting on my chapter - keep them coming! :)

you know, the time change at the end seemed kinda odd, not to mention I would've liked to hear/see more of their conversation. Other than that, it was really good...it will be interesting to see Dymphna's reaction to Cadeyrn's offer.

arg! when is lupe going to go after bryony! ahh! hurry and update!

Wonderful to see a new chapter. Thanks for answering my questions. It's great that you're familiarising yourself with classical mythology voluntarily. It can be pretty heavy going sometimes so I was lucky I did Classics at school. I also like that the romance is incidental to the plot and Bryony can actually function without her love interest or sitting around moping about him. Like I said your writing really is impressive; much more complex than most of the stories found on FP. This and 'Aelyn's Story' in the Romance section are probably the only two on the whole site that have impressed me in terms of world-building, characterisation, plotting, etc.

Good luck with your exams, I just finished mine so I feel your pain!

an a short i'd have to say but that come with the end of the year. less time. i'm glad they got the king back. and you put in a little of what was happening in the forest. please write more soon. clair_a_net

Another great chapter. Very much looking forward to the rest of the story.