I'm so glad I found this. This is just riveting-I've been unable to tear myself away. I can't help feeling a bit warm and fuzzy by how her comrades have accepted her, like when they were surreptitiously trying to shield her from the stares. I really hope you update soon!

Aw, what was a depressing chapter. Have you read any Greek or Roman epics?. The last two sentences are beautiful and remind me of a technique used in them. So you're in good company with Homer and Virgil, which I think it's fitting as this story is pretty epic. I like the addition of Driscoll.

oh..you're definitely dragging this out, aren't you? i want lupe! *pouts...unprettily* lol. but it was a nice chapter. at least were progressing! i liked the interrogation of bryony about lupe anyways, you better update soon!

The way you are plotting this is astonishing, I never seem to know what's coming next. I'm glad that things will be changing, especially with regards to the women. I love the involvement of the gods-reminds me of Greek epics.

Hm...what an intriguing character the king is. I can see why Lupe so threatened by him, he must seem so different to the straight talking, instinctive behaviour of the Wolves.

You write fight scenes incredibly well. In fact, all your writing so far has been veryimpressive; I've only noticed a few mistakes, e.g. 'perusal' instead of 'pursual' in this chapter. this is going back a few chapter but I like how you described the king's feelings versus his appearance. He sounds very interesting.

Argh, how embarassing for Bryony! Is there an order to the value of the fangs?

I find the stealing of women aspect of the plot distasteful because it's essentially rape. I'm aware that tribes used to do this in the past, so I'll try and look past it and being the only true female of the tribe creates an interesting dynamic in Briony's life.

What an interesting and original premise for a story! I'm a bit confused by how they speak; I mean I understand them using howls if their hunting on seperated from each other, but these everyday conversations seem pretty complex-are these howled too or do the "talk"? Anyway, so far I'm really impressed by your writing and I'm really rooting for Bryony.

I like it. Period. :)

Wee! An update! Keep writing - I absolutely love this story, and can't wait for it to continue! What's going to happen to Dymphna? What will happen during the hunt? I'm all ears - or eyes, as the case may be. :) Keep up the good work! :)

Great chapter. It has suspense and then humour to relieve some of the suspense for a minute. Great job and I hope you update again soon.

Hey I'm happy an update. I know hwo ya feel time is just flying by. are the other wolves going to come after her? Whats happening in the village? Maybe add a sceen or two in the next chapt. just a thought. keep it up. clair_a_net

Have some Lupe in the next one! I miss his character so. *sigh* Haha. This wasn't a bad cahpter at all. On the contrary, I enjoyed it very much. I feel bad for poor Dymphna though. She loves Cadeyrn, and he'd be disgusted with his people for giving her away as ransom. Poor chica.

I'm glad Bryrony fits in with the others now though. She needs companionship. Update quickly if you can!

Yay!

i like the story