I really don't like Dymphna and Cadeyrn is just *sigh* I don't want him to be my king that's for sure..

I just wanted to let you know that they're looking for manuscripts over at .com. maybe you'll consider uploading this story there? It's really very good. And I hope it gets published (and translated into every know language in the universe, including Klingon and Elvish) and distributed on the shelves of bookstores everywhere someday!

Beautiful story up until the last chapter. A writer that can not finish is not a writer at all.

Amazing story. I read this all in one go.

Wow, I have gotten nothing done since yesterday while I read your story. This was absolutely fantastic. Your style is slightly reminiscent of Tamora Pierce (a high compliment to be sure). I'm impressed with your work!

This is truly a grand story, but I find it best to introduce characters as the story goes along. I'm sure you've heard this before, but its hard to follow. •m•

I have but one question, which may fan some flames, but by any chance are you inspired at all by Jay Naylor? He had done something similar, which sparked my query to read as such.

Your story is a great read. It should be a movie. It's one of my favourites.

This was an absolute BLAST to read! Very well written with a good plot. I could tell you lost interest toward he end, but it was still good. I know what it's like to lose interest. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, thanks for posting it! Keep writing, you could easily be published!

Wow, amazing story, really well written. Definitely one favs. Thx for the great read!

Hey!

This is fabulous! I TOTALLY LOVED IT! Its 4 in the morning, can't say much now.

Awesome story! TOTALLY SWEET, though you might want to put it on "complete"

Love and all the mushy stuff,

yuki

Wht happnd to raul pls? tell? my head is on the verge of bursting here...

this story completed satisfied my craving for a tribal, medieval-age story. it has everything i could ever want - fantasy, adventure, romance (but not overly so - perfect!) thanks for finishing it! though i didn't get the ending.. does this mean that raul ran away, like lyall? but wasn't he only 5 years old?

A bit confusing t'wards the end. Raul was her cousin, right? The one that didn't like to fight, and came down with a fever? Anyways, WOW! Awesome story. Is there a sequel? Maybe an explanation about exactly WHAT in the world happened to the little pup with a fever? Anyways, Awesome story! I found nearly no errors in grammar. (I'm talking 3 max... in the WHOLE story. Then again.. it was never my strongest point. Quite the opposite, in fact.) You could've included a bit more of Chandra in the story. There was a single chapter where she made an appearrance, so we never really got to know much about her. Hm.. does the word appearrance have one or TWO R's? That gonna bother me 'till I figure it out..

Awesome story. Rather original too! Also, I get the feeling you love wolves. Me too! AkeOokami means Bloody Wolf, I also use three other usernames, ShinkuOokami, meaning Crimson Wolf, GinKitsune, meaning Silver Fox, and RyuTsume, meaning Dragons Claw, or Dragon Claw. its Japanese incase you where wonderin'.