Wow. I love this story - I like how you've created your own universe for the story and the culture of the Wolves, and the plot seems interesting so far. The characters too, I like it that you don't neglect them and they're believable. What's Reule and Ulva up to? ;) Keep it up!

what? you can't be serious! they have to fight! tormad will most certainly want to conquer thier home too! so why do they have to be cowards and try and keep to themselves. they live in that world how can they think that the problems in it are not their own! *sigh* oh well. hurry and update i can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank goodness you updated! I've been waiting for you to for a while now; this was really good. It makes me want to read more and find out what happens. Keep going! Madi

ok! omg! i feel so bad for bryony! ! ! but i'm even more happy you finally updated this! i swear i've been checking up on this story every chance i get! it is soo good! i want to know what killed reule! like it had to be a wolf right? so why did ulva say that? oh well. . .well i simply cannot wait till the next update! please hurry this up a little!

i get what you mean...it is hard to write this time of year. the second i find the time, i get the flu, and then i have a sinus infection...anyway. im glad to see you've updated. when are we going to get some real Bryony/Lupe action?

I just wanted to offer my encouragement to you. It IS hard to write at this time of year, isn't it? I'm growing very curious about where this story will lead, and about Bryony and Lupe. I've stuck with you this long, and I'll stick with you until the end!

Yay, you updated! I've been waiting for ages...D Thank you, thank you, thank you! Lolz... Can't wait for the next chappie!

YAY! you updated! I'm so very much happy! it'll be hard to wait, but theres nuffin I can do... but I can hardly contain myself till the next update comes! have a good day, an yeah!

Wow, Bryony had an emotional break down there, didn't she? I think it adds great plot to the story; keep going. Madz

i really like this story... its well written and has a good plot...yeh...keep writing..

I love your story keep at it!
~Courtney

You really are a very talented writer, love this story, and so far as I can see this seems to be headed in a very interesting direction! And though I hate saying this, because everybody says it, I'm going to say it anyway for lack of knowing what else to say: keep up the good work and happy writing!

ok well, i don't really like dymphna that well. . . i don't really know why. . . i gues it's just that she is the daughter of the king of kras and might very well be a spy or something. i don't know. well hurry and add more about bryony. . . thats who this is about anyway! lol

Hey, very informative chappie! Can't wait till next one.

Great chapter. Go Cadeyrn! :) But he IS going to burn out soon, poor boy. Dymphna is sweet, and her father is a very bad man. *glares at Tormad*
Write more soon! I love this story. :)