At the end of a chapter, or something, d'you mind showing us how to pronounce so of these names? Bryony is sorta simple, but the Wolf God Reule of whatever is somewhat hard to pronounce. I'm guessing Lupe is pronounced like the Roman God Of Wolves, Lupe? (Lu-Pay) Varg is... rather straightforward. Thanks. You've done pretty well with this story. Alot of authors make it so whos going to be with who rather obvious. At this point, Bryony could be with either Cadeyrn or Lupe. Its not obvious. Just, please, don't do that weird 3 way thing. Lol.

WEll im sad u didnt have any passion for it...but Im glad there's another story about the wolves that im gonna go spend HOURS on the computer reading...anyway i LOVED YOUR STORY TO DEATH! LIKE IT WAS...EPIC. lol anywayy you're a great writer D

Oh wow this was BRILLIANT. I absolutely love fantasy adventure stories like this, ive been hooked all day. I loved the whole idea of the wolf people, and the world you created, it was very realistic and all of the characters were strong and well developed. I loved of the battles as well, you've written them very well and of course the romance between Lupe and Bryony was captivating although i have to admit i would have thought she would have been more angry that he slept with another woman and after she had forgiven him it would have been nice to see a bit more passion, it seems like the romance aspect kind of dwindled towards the end of the story.

Cant wait to read more of your work! :D

wow...

THIS WAS AWESOME!

i really enjoyed reading this :D

I just wanted to say that I love the romance between Bryony and Lupe, especially from Lupe’s POV.

oldiers always exaggerate, Edur. Especially when they’re afraid of something.”

“Don’t you think they’re fear warrants some

*their

so sue me. i'm a pedant

ones. To anyone not in the tribe, the affect of this call would have seemed

shouldn't that be Effect? i might be wrong, it just seems that it should...

I just read your whole story and I just want to say thank you. It is really wonderful story. There's a lot of things going on with this story and you did it marvelously. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this story and I truly applaud you.

i CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LOST 'PASSION' with this story. MY GAD. THis fic is really awesome! Well..except the epilogue. I love how you describe the wolf tribe. It's everything I've imagined them to be and you captured it perfectly. I love the romance between Lupe and Bryony and lots else.

Best story ever.

I don't have the words for it except,

thanks for bringing it to fictionpress.

I finally finished this tory! It took me a long time, but i finally finished. i just want to say that i really enjoyed reading this story. Mostly i just read supernatural stories, but this one caught my eye. It was well written and i really enjoyedreading it. I hope to see more of your work

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Keep Writing!

Haybell :)

Hey, I just discovered this story and oh my goodness it's amazing. I love it! Bryony and Lupe are amazing together too :). Hehe now I'm off to read Raul's story! :D

ah they're so cute

i hope hope hope they get together

cuz her and lupe is kinda cliche no offense

great story :D

hahahhaha

i hope she ends up with cadeyrn :)

Beautiful writing and beautiful ending. I'm deeply impressed. Loved and enjoyed this story. Just unsure as to why it isn't under Romance as well!