Reviews for Fear Not the Wolves
FantasiaFirst chapter 4 . 11/2/2003
Very nicely done. Also very original. I haven't read anything like this. Or maybe it's just me? Anyway, you have to continue this real quickly! I'll be waiting.
DragonLady of Avalon chapter 3 . 11/2/2003
YAY! Girl Power!
jayce chapter 3 . 10/25/2003
I must admit, i'm a sucker for strong females against a male-dominated world. I love those characters, especially when they're warriors. have I been getting too much animé recently? yes. women are strong. don't ask. let's not "digress" too much*coughcough* [popular word these days, isn't it?] in my opinion, this story has so much potential, especially with the world and characters you have created. -i love your characters!-
aquarius chapter 2 . 10/25/2003
Ch1: scentsent

I agree with Andrea, you wouldn't go back and change your few grammatical errors, even after it was brought to your attention, but you could send it to one of us and we'd change it /for/ you. You're right, this story is so different from your usual style. I like it! Your names are surely fitting, though I'm pretty sure 'Fenris' was the name of a fearsome wolf, the son of the god Loki. Is Bryony truly the name of a plant? You always were one for the names.

forever yours, jessc
CarrieTheLeopard chapter 3 . 10/23/2003
I like it! I recognized Lupe as a wolf-related name. I don't see any problems here... Oh, and please R and R my story, The Fairy War! (Sadly, I'm not the only one with that -title-... Yar)
tawnyfawn chapter 3 . 10/23/2003
Getting better and better. I especially liked the tawny and fawn fangs, (hehehehe).

Your writing style is really good and the story is made believable. keep up the great work and PLEASE post again soon as I REALLY want to know wht happens!
Feldinaut chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
Very original and interesting idea for a story. But such ideas spark curiosity, and for this reason you may want to go a bit more in depth with your writing. The others gave good suggestions. I'll be keeping track of this story for sure.
Daisy Woodstock chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
I like it! Please update soon!
Lady of Fianna chapter 2 . 10/20/2003
Well, let me just say that this thing DEFINITELY has the potential to be something unique and wonderful. Please, longer chapters though!
dana chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
great begining! sounds like the start of a great book! elaborate more on the tribe's history... what EXACTLY they did... create a language or style of speech for them, they seem to b from another world or times. are they proud, or slobs. or do they speak like everyone else. explain more why a girl was a problem. im sorry im writing your book for you! i just wish i thought of the idea! go on with the writing... i want to see a best seller!
Daisy Woodstock chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
I love it! And I really really hope you continue!
Taymarua chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
wow, this looks like it will be totally awesome. its an interesting society youve developed, and i love their reactions to a girl. keep it up!
tawnyfawn chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
Firstly, I love the name Bryony, its always been a fave of mine. Secondly, I love wolfs, always been a fave of mine. Thirdly, I LOVE THIS STORY!

It really well written so far and you describe everything really well, the tribe etc. Keep up the excellent work.) This one is defiantly going on my fave stories list!

Also, If you have some time could you please review my first novel, the battle of tierre and give me some tips? )

From a newly devoted reader: tawnyfawn
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