Ian and weston should have sex. It would be awesome

Hmm...interesting.

Not generally the thing I'd find myself reading, but I can relate a lot of the characters to people I know. Good story.

One thing, and I don't know if this changes later on, but Weston's narrative voice sounds like a girl. Just a mention...

this story is amazing! i love it! plz plz plz continue it! it's such a good story! best one i've read so far!

I really love this story, i hope you update it soon

That is so evil!How could you stop there?I love it the story is and Ian fianlly got it .I still love Shane though!

Oh my gosh I love 's so writing your very good at the it up!

YAY! More boysex! I'm so happy!
Elias: I feel prett -
Charlie: (random gay character from play) Hey, that's my line! I feel pretty! Oh so pretty! I fell pretty and witty and GAY! *spirit fingers*
*drop-kicks them all away* And stay out!
I can't wait to find out what Weston's present is. AND SHANE IS SO DAMNED CUTE! He answers the door in the NUDE for crying out loud! *glomps Shane and Ian*

I swear it was fate! It was fate that I found this story, it was fate that Mak got sick, it was fate that made Mak and her painkillers not update till Friday,August 20, 2004 which was my BIRTHDAY! That is so ironically wonderful. I do feel special! lemme hug myself...aw. Well I'm glad my hatred could help, I never thought that was possible. Tessa this is great for your first time its like 100 times better then mine could ever be it must be very difficult to get a guys point of view while being a girl. ME so happy for YOU, and let me tell you I can still see bitemarks on my finger...*stares at finger* if it would of gone on any longer there might of been blood. OH YEAH! that reminds me I wish it would of gone on longer...it was stopped so suddenly, made me feel um empty? Well thankfully they finally did it ME HAPY AGAIN...now even though it satisfied me a bit how about that threesome? or even better: FOURSOME! i know i know don't push your luck bibi but hey can't a girl dream? Well i shall not take up more of your time, hopefully Mak you feel better soon and thanks for the dedication, luckily it didnt take me as long to see the alert thingy so that i could read and review...MUST OF BEEN FATE! *_*

ah...that was worth waiting 19 chappies for! but ill hate you if you really want me too...ill sulk and sit on my own in a corner and forget about you until the next chappie turns up... hope youre al rite mak... get well soon! hope your medication makes you go blue and grows wings! maybe you can use them to slap tessa round the head!

Yay! They finally had sex. Woopie.
Excuse me couldn't control the raging yaoi fangirl in myself.

YAY BOY SEX YUMMY YUMMINESS M GAH *dies in a puddle of her own drool*
Elias(random, very gay muse): *wanders in, has a nose bleed, collapses next to Freaky*
Socks(random gay muse): *wanders in, stares wide-eyed at the scene*
Adrian(random straight muse): *wanders in* Oh GOD! *runs back out*
In other words - I LOVED IT! MWUAHAHAHA! And why should we hate you? I LOVE YOU ALL! MWUAHAHAHA!
Please tell me there's more. Foursome! LET'S HAVE A FOURSOME, DAMMIT!
...
*drags away her muses*

WAT THE! I have so many mixed emotions rit now I don't know where to start. I am SUPER furious at me for not getting on sooner and reading this magnificint piece of work. I am SUPER furious at YOU *points and glares* MAK!for ending with all this foreplay and no REAL action. I feel super jittery rit now it's not even funny. I found myself BITING MY FINGER as I kept reading on! AGH! I wanted to see some action so badly! WHY do you leave it up to my imagination to try and think about what Shane and Conner were doing? Hikari is absouletly the greatest, her ideas are so brillantly wicked! O i just wanna SCREAM rit now. It's not fair to make us suffer! . Update soon! I will review sooner i promise . this chapter is absolutly the greatest!

This is one of the best shonen ai stories I have ever had the pleasure to have my psycho little mind read. I am a major sucker for gay boys. Have an obsession with shonen ai, can’t help it. Anyways, I absolutely love it! I don’t sleep until the next chapter is out! I wont! I also think I have fallen in love with one of your characters. Ian no mono! ~*sigh*~ got to go back to dreaming up an alternative chapter until the next is out. ~*naughty little mind*~
Krisitna

Very good written, interesting plot, the characters are ALL great (and Ian sounds like such a cutey)and the sex scenes are a good deal better than some I've read. *shudders at the memory of horribly written lemons* Anyhoos, I hope Tessa gets the next chappie up soon, lest I'm forced to resort to... extreme measures. (insert maniacal laughter) Well, good luck on da story, keep up the good work!

u realise that if i hate u im gonna do it properly... no actually im nt gonna hate u im gonna pester tessa9...though knowing her she probably has already written the chappie but has to fine tune it to the details in this chappie! lol!