Reviews for Storm
daphnegray78 chapter 2 . 3/29/2004
Interesting...I wonder what she meant by 'I made so many calculations this time, what could possibly have gone wrong?' You've definately gotten my curiousity piqued. Excellent job! :o)
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
I absolutely love the way you described the sunrise! The personification and the details you used were astoundingly beautiful. Awesome work!
desolus chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
Excellent descriptions. It's lucid, fiery, and wonderfully, bitingly written. The personification was a little overdone, but it made this piece what it is: painfully beautiful.

'Inside came screams that did well to rival the noise of the storm. However, they were not those of fear or anguish but the agonising cries that every mother would recognise.'

- I love this. It's not only pure tragedy, but painful. It hit me like a gloved fist.

Unload more. - I need to read _more_.
Lizzybelle Kay chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
This is excellent! You write wonderful, vivid imagery and great personification! Can't wait for an update!