Reviews for what you did
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Wow, short and to the point. Very strong. I love how you used such little words and such awesome imagery to show the process of your heart and what happens when you're betrayed. totally awesome.
reiphil chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Nice poem, short, but gets to the point. Seems like a before, during and after poem about a relationship. Like everything fragile at first... then it breaks... then with the lost love, your heart turns cold. Nice imagery.