Reviews for A Breath of Life
pharaoh chrispy chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
I like this... though kind of funny with da hen.
Eien Nemurigusa chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Thats creepy.. The type of thing i am in too. Hen..cool
Flotom chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
wtf? what's with the hen?
shinco chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Wow, it's like the hen came back to life! Cool poem!
irishdancerx33 chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
um..kinda wierd, i don't get the part with the hen. where did it come from?
Arsenic.Dreams chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
I liked it although did you have a hen fetish when you were ten? Kidding. It would sound better if you rewrite without the hen because has some serious tones to it and let's face it, a hen isn't that serious. Good job.