Reviews for Moonlight
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
wow, really good for one so young! bravo i say x weasel within x
Pharaoh chrispy chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
ha hahahah
Bamboti chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
wow i've never seen so much put into a profile! Anyways... I like this, not the best, but not at all bad.
CA
JRRTempleton chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
GAWD! this is good!
I happen to be an alliteration fanatic! and if you write this good in grade 6 (don't have the slightest clue how old you are now though) then I gotta go find more poems from you because you're prolly damn good
fetishizedarmadillo chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Eh...ok but the alliteration gets too much at times and seems to spoil the mood you're trying to set. The long, clunky words make it sound a bit like a grade-schooler attempting to painfully inject "good" vocabulary into a poem. And it's very ambiguous-I understand you were young and this is poetry, where a certain level of ambiguity is actually needed but it just gets a tad incoherent at times.
armadillo
shinco chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Wow. Cool poem. Like it lots. _
tiger lily8 chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Wow, this is pretty good for an eleven year old. I wrote nonsense when I was this age. Heh! I love the description and the mood it sets. Good job!
Artemis Astralstar chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
i love this poem , just one thing, i really disagree on moonlight being apart from that, i love it! yay!