Reviews for The Loss of Innocence
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Very interesting . . . Not bad at all. You've got some good recollections in this.

"Can you remember

When you were a child?

When you played with your toys?

And gave them lives and histories?"

Heh - I still do this.

Tenika Dargan
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
wow very beautiful poem keep posting please comeback for more... swirlygirl AKA thaiswirl (my pen names)
Cassandra le Reille chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Wow... this was... I don't know. There aren't really words. I want to cry, and yet, I'm not - or I can't, or something. It's bittersweet and sady very true. A moving piece. Stunning perception. Keep writing, don't let your talent go to waste.

~ Moriah