|Reviews for Victim|
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Really strong, especially the saturday stanza, that one is kinda bitter sweet. The last stanza is good, I guess the message it sends is kinda good too, controlling your own fate.
| estrela chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
aw... how sad... nicely written, but sad...
| me10 chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
this is so powerful! its brilliant, the ending is so clear and full of emotion. Very good message-welldone!
| Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Wow, very good.. One little suggestion: the line "So I will die tomorrow" I think it should be separated from the rest by a space. It's more dramatic if it stands alone. Very deep.
| quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Great poem, original, and emotionally powerful.
Thanks for reviewing my stuff, and keepy writing : )
| Mime chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Man, the ending was really good in this one. Keep it up.
| The intellect chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
cool subject, original, the ending is very powerful, but its not ur best i have to say
| IHJ chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
I recommend having someone read over your work before you upload it. Some technical errors here and there. Simplistic, but the ending stanza packs a real punch! Maybe it wasn't what you expected, but it IS something to be happy over!
| swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
wow i really felt this poem so much violence in the world today...i love the ending to this poem although it is very sad great work!
| forever fallen chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
O...this is good. :D i like it. ..but i think we have the same problem, lol bad spelling! But this is good. Wheh i can log-in again I'll add it. _
| Ian chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
VERY powerful ending. I really like this one, really strong emotions in it