Reviews for Marshmallow Man
APersonAndAHalf chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Wow. This is a truly beautiful poem. Marshmallow man...very original.~A. Person
Rainbow Sherbert chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
I think I understand this one but then I don't think I understand this one..Absolutely excellent insight though. It is very deep, weither you understand it fully or not...
Silver Phoenix Falling chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
Great imagery in this poem!
katyruth chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
hey-good job. i like some of the language you use to describe the marshmellow man-"eyelids are worn out

From staring at the pale wall" good use of words. keep writing!
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Hmm. I agree with Liquid, that sounds a bit like The Crucifix story. Not that that's bad, I love Crucifixes! P I even have one with Mary on it. hehe, okay I'm babbling,

but great job, loved the poem, it gave me a very clear image.

LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
This might sound absolutely crazy but near the end the lines:

"Wants you all to idolize

Marshmallow man

He hates himself and wants to die

He loves himself and wants to live"

"Cut him open, spill his guts

That's what he wants

For us to feel his agony

Cut him up with his dress

Ugly mess, he still cries for you

With shards of the guitar

Stinging his slashed wrists

Lying in his own ocean of blood"

These made me think of a Jesus on a crucifix. Very interesting, unless I'm just totally insane; but either way really good poem, kinda depressing, but hey yaya yaya.