Reviews for Can't Set Me Free
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
¿Which boundaries,

Worry you about this life?—

¿Moon's or Sun's orbit?
soulspring chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
great piece! the format works very well.
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
OMG! I loved this! Wow... all the different types of Haiku stuck into one poem was just incredible. I absolutly loved it. Awesome write... awesome.

write on!
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
O_O wow. i'm almost speechless. reading this really makes you feel trapped, and toward the end it's even horrifying, like this part especially:

must be dowsed as cigarettes

says the dictator

they'll burn your

child

i got the most disturbing image from that, and the ending made a huge impact on me as well. EXCELLENT piece.
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
it's like gasping for air...don't know if you intended it, but excellent for your theme...great work

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swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
wow great poem i liked it a lot ... thanks for the reviews! swirlygirl AKA thaiswirl both are my pen names!