|Reviews for A Simple Thought|
| gothicrebal chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Wow...thats all i can say...amazing job keep writing.
| Spryte Andoloni chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
oh wow! I love it! Love it love it love it! *squeals* I usually stray away from poems but this is definately an exception!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
That was really fine work.
Heart of the Sword
| IHJ chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Good repetition of the lines
A simple thought
Sends me through
A whirling sense
Of loving you/Of hating you.
I like how it ends with "Longing for you". Different sentence structure from the past stanzas. The words "again" and "win" don't really rhyme in pronounciation, but it kinda works.
Sweet and whimsical...