Reviews for Squeezing Life Through Your Hands
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Wow - Excellent. I love horror poetry. ;) The material is good; I like the way it's set up.

Tenika Dargan
Exegesis chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
O happy happy joy joy obviously! LOL it's cool, Rozzie. REALLY! Way ta go Donny! Sorry. It's cool...bye!
Mal'lhasbelin chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Wow... that was chilling... Here i am sitting hoping i get a reveiw and here you are writing wonderful poems... o my god that was so well writen. Keep Writing!
p r o w l i n g . w o l f chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Oh... I really like this. I think that maybe it would be cool to do a couple of pieces to go with it, like from her view, from the murderer's view and also from the ocean's view...

"Her arms raised

To the surface

Requesting aid

That never came"

My favorite part. Goes for many real life situations as well... :(
AVIGON chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
I love how you "ellipsed" some parts, like the part "The water below" that's like a bridge between the previous and the next line. I never could quite get the hang of that.