Linata seems to be a good character, and yo uhave worked out her personality nicely. You might want to do the same for Tihohara or some of the other rulers-they don't do much yet. It does seem strange, however, that Linata is introduced to her high position with no prior training. Why was she chosen, and not someone more used to responsibility?

Hi! This is one of "the Ladies", author of Fiona. Thanks for reviewing. Your story is pretty good. The concept of the fairies and the four realms/seven elements is very interesting. However, it seems that you jump into the story too quickly; try introducing the character of Tihohara and Linata a little more through their actions, and save some of the description of the fairy hierarchy for later in the story, where it can come out gradually.

Heya,
Thanks for reviewing my story "The Game" there will be an update soon.
Anyway, gr8 story you have going here, imagination running wild lol, Tihohara is a pretty spiffy character :)
I like fairies, fairies are good, lol.
Update soon!
~Cassie

Sorry I didn't review earlier! You have a lot of potential, and this story is coming out great! You just might want to work on chronological order a bit, because the beginning kind of confused me. But besides that, this is a really nice story!

A story well-written! Interesting too! I'd like to know what will happen next. And thanks for reviewing my story! ;)

You might want to watch your grammar a bit, but everything else is good. Your ideas about the fairies are interesting, kinda patterned, but interesting just the same. I especially like the part about every girl having her own personal fairy.

Sou na, I do like I few errors you might want to tidy up, but I do that tuu so you havenoneed to worry! ;;