leave it posted, lol!

I like the story so far, but I think it would sound a lot better if you wrote using larger paragraphs and with longer sentences. Short sentences can make the story seem very choppy.

nice mystery hook. i look forward to finding out what exactly the "red road" means.
i hope you don't mind my critiques, but i have a habit of saying what i think. i really like this story.
i think you might like my story "Dragon Druid." the atmosphere is something like that in the beginning of this story.

yes, they do. it's somewhat annoying.

are the Forest Folk elves? they sound like it.

this would be easier to read if you combined some of the short sentences into paragraphs.

do the words have a translation? if so, do you intend to share their meaning with the readers?

that's a big bummer man...

Wow..I liked this chapter. And Nora didn't whine too much. Aww, I'm gonna miss the forest tongue.._ oh well, life goes on and this is still a really good story.

GREAT CHAP!
wow!

Hi! I dont have much time to read whole story but Ive read already two chapters and I find it great! Ill finish reading soon and give you know. Its a wonderful story.

WOOT! lol. Show me the seventh chapter after school!

I like this story! Going to put it on as one of my favorite stories!

O.o Follow the red road? Intriguing.I can't wait to find out more. Don't worry, short chapters are good. Keep posting, I like this story._

This, I have to say, is the best story I've read in a , you have left me speechless, something I never thought would characters are so realistic, I love keep 've hooked the next review I'll be more coherent, but please keep posting.