Reviews for Forest Folk
rainlifling chapter 10 . 9/16/2005
leave it posted, lol!
Boadicia chapter 3 . 4/17/2004
I like the story so far, but I think it would sound a lot better if you wrote using larger paragraphs and with longer sentences. Short sentences can make the story seem very choppy.
RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 7 . 1/20/2004
nice mystery hook. i look forward to finding out what exactly the "red road" means.
i hope you don't mind my critiques, but i have a habit of saying what i think. i really like this story.
i think you might like my story "Dragon Druid." the atmosphere is something like that in the beginning of this story.
RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 8 . 1/20/2004
yes, they do. it's somewhat annoying.
RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 4 . 1/20/2004
are the Forest Folk elves? they sound like it.
RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 3 . 1/20/2004
this would be easier to read if you combined some of the short sentences into paragraphs.
RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 2 . 1/20/2004
do the words have a translation? if so, do you intend to share their meaning with the readers?
silverheart121 chapter 9 . 1/19/2004
that's a big bummer man...
Rannyn Telrunya chapter 8 . 12/23/2003
Wow..I liked this chapter. And Nora didn't whine too much. Aww, I'm gonna miss the forest tongue.._ oh well, life goes on and this is still a really good story.
silverheart121 chapter 7 . 12/6/2003
Laniana chapter 2 . 12/2/2003
Hi! I dont have much time to read whole story but Ive read already two chapters and I find it great! Ill finish reading soon and give you know. Its a wonderful story.
rainlifling chapter 7 . 12/2/2003
WOOT! lol. Show me the seventh chapter after school!
Iceunia chapter 7 . 11/26/2003
I like this story! Going to put it on as one of my favorite stories!
Rannyn Telrunya chapter 7 . 11/24/2003
O.o Follow the red road? Intriguing.I can't wait to find out more. Don't worry, short chapters are good. Keep posting, I like this story._
Rannyn Telrunya chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
This, I have to say, is the best story I've read in a , you have left me speechless, something I never thought would characters are so realistic, I love keep 've hooked the next review I'll be more coherent, but please keep posting.
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