|Reviews for A person|
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
this is good and i like the way u summarised i dunno why but it caught my eye! Good poem it flows really well i like it :)
Bout the anorexia poem i realise its not really what most anorexics think but its meant to be the anorexic looking at herself just before shes dies and realising what shes put herself through. I know i havent really explained that though...may do that now! Thanx for the review :D
| AvaRicE chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
I think alot of people would deny that what you say here is true ... but it's a topic I've pondered on alot lately, and maybe you're right.
Nice structure & well written :)
| Amber chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Now this is Ian. LOL . He looks like he is a god or something when he walks around school, like nothing can bring him down. But I know him bettre than most and he is misurable, and a girlfriend would help him out alot. But he always says no. He just needs some good lovin I say. LOL
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Aw I like this one, it's so true. Good job!
| Ian chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
This is very nice, and a good point