Reviews for Bang Bang
LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Yeah...I kinda need your e-mail to send you the tips on formatting..._ so if you could e-mail me that would be great. Hope to help you laterz.

Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Very fave of yours is still the spring day one which I adore! But this one is very true and I like your style.
Amber chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Great poem, my brother went off to the war in Iraq, he is ok(thank god) This is sad, but true, I was scarred that I wouldnt see him again. In war evryone does lose someone, this is so true.
Impressionist chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
...interesting. the 'bang bang' doesn't do anythig for the poem though. if anything, it takes away from the sense of seriousness and creates an almost immature feel. try searching for another word that would better portray what you're trying to say.
LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Another awesome one, wow. I have a few tips for the formatting if your intersted but it requires you to be able to save your stuff in html format. Let me know if you are interested.

Ian chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
This is good, dont get the last two lines though.
QuestionEverything chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
Simple but really good