Reviews for MOLLE's Paragraph
Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
short and disturbing. Well wrote and imaged.
mutiger chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Wow, um ok. That was just a touch violent for my tastes. It's ok. I would like some explination as to what her motive was in killing him. Mabey some background information. Something to prepare me for what was going to happen. Just an oppinion.
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
This is crazily awesome. Short and sweet. I like the last words. Interesting.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
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-very descriptive, that was the main point now wasn't it?

-what were the motives? if there was to be a sequel, you/molle could elaborate on that

-this was my favorite line: " He was unable to move for the looming spirit of eternal rest was near. " ...very powerful.