|Reviews for Grave|
| Blood And Brown Sugar chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
I really like this one, I happen to enjoy things involving vampires, well, good things. Thanks for reviewing something I wrote, and I rather like yours, so, I will start to read your extensive list here and add you to my favorites list. Samyaza
| deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
in this one i dont think the lack of punctuation really worked. it is more of a story, with just broken up sentances (that magcally happen to rhyme! how appropriate... how do yuo do it so flawlessly? not sure about the love/dove one though...) and therefore should be punctuated like sentances. but apart from that, tis another damn good poem.
| Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
I have no idea where you have vampires in that, but it sounded really cool. The only problem I had was that it was so wordy that I couldn't keep the rhyme. If this had been free-verse, then I think it may have been even better. Just a suggestion. Still a job well done.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame