Wow, I don't know what else to say. It's amazing, great write.

Excellent ending line to a wonderful piece. Yet again, very well done! This is a very bittersweet piece, and very good.

Tenika Dargan

WOW... The imagery is so descriptive and expressive….. Well written from beginning to end… your writing is fantastic… Is your dream to one day be a poet? It should be.

very interesting. right off the bat, i liked the phrase "winter falls," very nice. the only advice i have for you is to step away from obscure literary allusion and reach for richer imagery. props to you on they way you use words. keep writing!

wow excellent... compeltely true & great imagery. ne likes htis poem a lot a lot!

Good job, I think this is the last one, wow. Well post more for me to read, Me WANT MORE. You are such a great writer*stares in awe*

Nicely done...hm. To me it seems like its about the passage of time and growing older. Heh, um yea. Beautifully written. Loved the images.

Fav line:

"A pen drop equals the pinnacle of time"

True true _ Write on Liquid!

Jess 0:o)

yeah, that about sums it up. growing up is for adults...I'm going to stay childish as long as possible.

I like the rhyming scheme mainly because it's not common, and only is used to compliment every now and then, and not to carry the poem. that's much better than a simple ABAB format. well done in that aspect.

yes, I do like this. well done.