Reviews for Envelope of Purity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I don't know what else to say. It's amazing, great write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent ending line to a wonderful piece. Yet again, very well done! This is a very bittersweet piece, and very good. Tenika Dargan |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW... The imagery is so descriptive and expressive….. Well written from beginning to end… your writing is fantastic… Is your dream to one day be a poet? It should be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting. right off the bat, i liked the phrase "winter falls," very nice. the only advice i have for you is to step away from obscure literary allusion and reach for richer imagery. props to you on they way you use words. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow excellent... compeltely true & great imagery. ne likes htis poem a lot a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job, I think this is the last one, wow. Well post more for me to read, Me WANT MORE. You are such a great writer*stares in awe* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done...hm. To me it seems like its about the passage of time and growing older. Heh, um yea. Beautifully written. Loved the images. Fav line: "A pen drop equals the pinnacle of time" True true _ Write on Liquid! Jess 0:o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, that about sums it up. growing up is for adults...I'm going to stay childish as long as possible. I like the rhyming scheme mainly because it's not common, and only is used to compliment every now and then, and not to carry the poem. that's much better than a simple ABAB format. well done in that aspect. yes, I do like this. well done. |