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SiD EliA chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Wow, that really was brilliant. It makes me feel less usless fot never learning how to play chess. Beautiful.
BlackBlueDreams chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Nicely constructed, good meter and an abstract feel. Very good indeed.
Barkers3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Wow. I love it. Very moving. I love how you split it up - it makes it seem so dis-jointed. brilliant!
synanceia chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
I find no words.I love this so much. Excellent work.
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
i can't quite put my finger on this, but it was quite well done and lovely and whatnot. the insertion of the checkerboard, the focus on the game, the moving of the black piece across the board, the coffee- all of these little details combine and really help to set a mood... all in all, it seems very somber and just.. yeah. lovely. i'm babbling now, so.. whatever. it was a wonderful poem and i enjoyed it.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
The thoughts of leaving and the images of the checker game colliding like that, just genius. I really don't know what to say.
Ree chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
*loves, worship and adores*

Of everything you've ever written, this is my favorite, and all because of the first few lines.

Let it be known, my love.

*carves it into her desk* I'm never going to forget this one, ever. I love it. I lovelovelove it.

Thanks so much for sharing it with me.

I love you more.