Reviews for My Haiku and Senryu Collection
smile persephone chapter 40 . 2/10/2005
I really love this one! Such beautiful imagery! Well done!
simpleplan13 chapter 40 . 2/8/2005
wow.. beautiful description
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 40 . 2/8/2005

Where have you been? I have missed you this big. *holds out arms*

This is a wonderful haiku - I like the rainbow image. :)

Keep writing! And hi! :D

~Namir Swiftpaw
Anthony Draconius chapter 39 . 12/12/2004
Ahh my favorite season, its nice to see a good haiku about it. I like the way you used cold at the end of the 2nd line. The only thing I'd suggest is cheanging the word "green" into "greens". That is just sometihng of my taste though.
simpleplan13 chapter 39 . 11/5/2004
beautiful i like it
moment2moment chapter 37 . 9/22/2004
Oh Seras, that is wonderful! One of my favorite by far.
With love,
simpleplan13 chapter 37 . 9/2/2004
I like it.. nice descriptions
simpleplan13 chapter 36 . 7/16/2004
interesting... I liek it!
simpleplan13 chapter 35 . 6/8/2004
very true.. nicely done
Systole chapter 34 . 6/2/2004
i liked it, very sensitive to colors and the purity of things.
simpleplan13 chapter 34 . 6/1/2004
very beautifully written... perfect description
Anthony Draconius chapter 33 . 5/28/2004
I could not fully realize the beauty in this haiku until I read it while it was dark out. The night is filled with mystery and legends of ol and you did a good job in capturing that. Ecellent choice of words Seras.
simpleplan13 chapter 31 . 5/22/2004
wow.. amazing description
simpleplan13 chapter 32 . 5/22/2004
hmm I can relate. nicely written
simpleplan13 chapter 33 . 5/22/2004
nice imagery... good job
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