Reviews for A Forced Affair
htmraw chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Amazing. Damn amazing. It flowed wierdly in some parts though. Still it's strange accepting deathby your own hand...
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
OMFG!
Ashley, this is practicaly a prophesy of ... us?
Did you call me into existence?
I am SO putting this in my profile (with the copyright of course) this instant! I have to have it be a part of me!
::suddles:: Seeker
McKenzie Drestire chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
What"!, i read something as a favour to one of your friends, but this is really intense stuff, you have a style going on here with a beat i could almost sing along to. it's beautiful, althought a little deep, but hey, too much is a good thing right, i love this, congradulations.
Peace out
Kenzie
Bitch Du Jour chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
This is by far my favorite you've ever written! It's so moving and enchanting...Beautiful art, love!
wingless chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
wow...for lack of a better word

this is quite amazing. it's beautiful, intense, and haunting. its definitely my favorte of yours so far.

in terms of mechanics: i wouldn;t change a word. honestly. the rhyming works beautifully, without disrupting the flow of the piece as rhyming often does.

this is amazing... you're very talented.

this could be a song