hey man, it's okay. Slowness is bound to happen. - i think you reviewed all of "Yasha Hybrid" for me... and "Blind Killer", but not my thrid. *shrug* oh well. i'll probably be taking that one off. check it out and tell me if i should. Anyway, i just hope you can get more free time. More time to update anyway. -
All: *WHACK*
Me: X_x
All: you ahve an appointment with us remember?
Me: AH o don't let them kill me! ANYWAY! GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE! ((okay so it's an apology chapter, but come on, it's habit!))
Ravage Blue

Great chapter! I like the way this is going, nice twist with him finding out right with his friends. Can't wait for the next chapter!

WOW! cool story! u gotta update soon!
cant wait!

o nice start to the story! i am already hooked!

Ravage: YAY! AN UPDATE! i was waiting for someone to update. hoping that their stories might help me think up a chapter. i have three chapters started ((one each for my three stories)) adn i am STUCK! dude if you can, e-mail me and help me out! i need it badly!
All: yes, yes she does.
Ravage: *galre* SHUT UP! ... anyway.. that was awesome cahpter yup yip. Though the thing between Kor and Burke is it? ((i forgot)) could have been longer. i liked the end conversation though. - GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!
Ravage Blue

DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME! OO' sorry it took me forever to read it... adn i'll make an update soon enough later in the waeek... hopefully... i'll be so happy when i do... i really need to do it.. well later! i'm at school right now.
GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!
Ravage Blue

Um...ok...sounds a lot like high school. The whole not being accepted and being singled out and beat on and stuff. Like it, very original. Like a hot dog with a twinkie for a bun. Ok, that was a bad analogy, I know, but you catch my drift, I'm sure. Keep it going.

Well, I finished these chapters Glad I found this story too! I like it so far, Keep up the good work. And WRITE MORE!

Great so far, I had to stop reading for the night before chapter six, but I'm looking forward to it! Can't wait till you write more, even if I'm not caught up yet!

Awesome. Being sucked into the ground, not a good feeling...
I like the whole Fesheron Dalgada chess game thingy going on. It always amuses me when gods are deciding the fate of lesser beings with cool indifference.
Update soon.
~Laura

hey dr.Z, couldnt help but write back. One word, impressive. But as i probably tell you every day, you spell worse than me man, and thats saying something. Keep writing, and let me know when you update, its addicting.

Tarlmond should know that no sleep is bad for him. Maybe he could try meditating to keep rested but for shorter periods of time than sleep. Poor him, he gets tortured in his dreams!
I wish I could grow bushes, but alas! No luck! Nice chapter. Please update soon.
~Laura

Hey that was good. other then the painful baldness, i really like Talon. for three reasons: 1) my fav ATV on ATV Offroad Fury 2 is teh Ravage Talon Blue, 2) I Roleplay as a guy named Talon, adn 3) he's just cool. _ well i really enjoyed that. GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!
Ravage Blue

That is scary with the clerics! I like the whole history. It gives you sort of an idea of what is going on! Keep it up!
~Laura

HIYA! that was good. i notcied one thing : carrier should have been career.
on a different note...WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
All: calm down.
Maru: she menas, you've updated, but haven't reviewed Yasha Hybrid chapter eight.
Ravage: TT i worked so hard on it!
Maru: abd thing is, she's right.
Ravage: - GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!