Reviews for A Dream
Kapoo chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
that's sweet I hate haikus though.
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
I can't write these at all, don't have a clue how :) You obviously do though, good work. I liked it.
Briar's Thorn chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
lol! i love it! it reminds of this one day at seminary...hehe...wow cuteThorn
Heatless Flame chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I like it. That's all. No further comments.
Jessica-Jessie chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
not the best but i am worse at haiku. makes more sense them tomorrow.
Madrynea chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Thanks for your review on my story. Don't take my words too harshly... I started writing when I was 15, and my first works totally sucked, it was a lot less good than yours. And you're one year ahead of me, so I'm sure you can make a lot of your writing, and it can be a very rewarding hobby. :)

I hope you take my critique as an attempt to help you improve, not as flaming. I don't write critiques on texts which I think are totally hopeless, only on those which I think have a future but can be made better.

Keep it up, and I'll keep checking back. :)
Audrey Black chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
thats lovely. and if you call me yulia one more time im going to butcher you
Happi Froggi chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Well I like it. It's all spiffy and stuff. I can't write haiku _
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
This is a very good haiku.
InMemoryofPhil chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
that was pretty good for writing in 3 seconds
AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Hi,

This was well put. :)

Please RR my poems if u can.

Thanks for sharing :)