|Reviews for He Pretends|
| rose chapter 2 . 2/1/2004
yeah! i can read and see again! umm..ok, its an ok poem, like the idea around it though!
| rose chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
| Emi Amara chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
yeah! thats a good poem! hi! thanks for the reviews! Good use of words and where you put them ...
if you get what i mean !
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Your formatting is messed up.
Please fix it.
Sorry if I sound rude, but I'm trying to make it so more people will read your writing.
That's my site that helps out with formatting problems with poems. I suggest you check it out (but don't click on any of the links - they're broken).
Your poem has a nice idea behind it, but I really am having a hard time reading it because of the messed up formatting.