Reviews for Hidden
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
I like the first three lines, but then the poem kind of just trails off...into something not so good.

You should try to keep all of your lines uniform in length, because then you have some sort of organization going for you, and that is always a plus. )

"I'," should be "I'm", too by the by.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
Pose For Me chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
Romantic! Love is such an easy thing to write about! lol. And I'm glad that I was the person to bring you back up to your high spirits and made you happy enough to write more poems!