Reviews for Beach
Isabella22 chapter 2 . 10/18/2006
This is really good! Gosh I love it!
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
hiya again!

cool!

i have to say i like it )

and i understand it too!

so newayz... great poem

and thank you for the comment on your profile thingy! i only jst saw it!

cya!
wordtooler chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
ookay...I didn't really understand this but then I don't know much about poetry. maybe if you tried a different approach?