|Reviews for Androgynously Poetic|
| Excited chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Hello! I just read the first chapter and found it compelling! I'm sure this will be a great story and am willing to continue on. I know since I just read the first chapter I'm not really entitled as of yet for any suggestions on the progression of the story however it just seem like things may be happening a little fast. As an author it is your job to give and retain information to your liking, keeping the readers in suspense, wanting more. In my opinion your writing style is great but I feel as though we are being spoon fed information on the characters. Do not describe to such an extent, let US figure some things out, I know you are trying to be considerate by providing a clear view on the happenings in this story and that is appreciated but i felt that Travis' parentsister's death had a less of an impact than it would if little snippets were given through out the course of the story making us (and the soon to appear emo kid?) question the reason for his behavior and addiction... All in all it was an exciting start and I'm anticipating what is to come next good job and continue writing!
| lali chapter 27 . 12/3/2011
your story is really good but all these changes of pov's hurt my brain
| temporarysmiles chapter 95 . 7/7/2011
Read this bit YEARS ago and spent DAYS this past week looking for it, finally found it. Though you two did not intend for this last chapter to be the end it is oddly... fitting, it is a cliff hanger but it really has tied up just enough to make you feel like it wasn't totally abandoned.
I realize it has been SIX years since either of you two has updated this, but I'd love to see the kinks reworked out of this and it all finished up. Cheers~
| allthatmelodrama chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Hi, so it's been like five years since you've updated. Which I guess pretty much means this story has been abandoned, so I've treated chapter 95 like the end. Although it would be totally awesome if you updated, because this story is amazing. I found this on someone's favourites list and I was like 'I can't do this to myself. I can't read this and then care for the characters and then never find out the end.' But I did it anyway 'coz I really liked the sound of the summary.
And then, yeah, I read it, and as I predicted I do care for the characters. -.-
Really, I just wanted to tell you that this is really good, on the off chance you decide to check in on this story.
| Arisa Ash chapter 95 . 5/9/2008
Holy sh*t that ending got me by surprise, but it was really good. This was like, an amazing story. You're a great writer.
| acousticbruises chapter 31 . 3/4/2008
From this point on I shall no longer review until the end of the novel, because I am sure that getting so many emails to your account... unless you want all these reviews, which, if that is the case, alert me and I will be HAPPY to go back and place in more commentary. For now, though, I shall review and then leave you a HUGE review at the end.
Cheers, Helena Emma Soliloquy
| acousticbruises chapter 30 . 3/4/2008
HURRAH RAVE FOR GIVING CERIN TIME DESPITE THE FACT THAT I'M SURE HE WANTS TO SCREW HIM INTO HIS BED! and oh shitz... TAWNY! WHY DID YOU SAVE RAVE'S NAME T_T
| acousticbruises chapter 29 . 3/4/2008
Uh-oh I have a BAD feeling about Tawny and Rayen right now _ but Rave and Cerin... BRING IT ON! jeje
| acousticbruises chapter 28 . 3/4/2008
Tawny is a naughty little wanker there... _
| acousticbruises chapter 27 . 3/4/2008
Oh wow, Rayen shot Tawny DOWN! That must of hit Tawny's ego quite a way... Oh more drama with Rave...
| acousticbruises chapter 26 . 3/4/2008
Cerin's grounded jaja... looser jeje only kidding, poor chap [
TAWNY YOU LIL' SKANK! FORGET RAVE 'CAUSE RAYEN IS RIGHT THERE FOR YOU!
| acousticbruises chapter 25 . 3/4/2008
... he reffered to himself as "the Rave" T_T'
| acousticbruises chapter 24 . 3/4/2008
Tawny, forget Rave and go with Rayen... enough said. ]
| acousticbruises chapter 23 . 3/4/2008
"I mean I gave him head, he should be thanking me"
| acousticbruises chapter 22 . 3/4/2008
CERIN! YOU ARE NOT A WHORE AND MY GOD ITS OKAY TO HAVE LITTLE FUN WITH BOYS... ESPECIALLY FOR US FRUIT FLY GALS' ]
mehr... *clicks next chapter*