Reviews for Unfinished Business
po chapter 2 . 10/3/2008
"like Casper" haha ...
po chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
this is an interesting beginning ...
sousie chapter 9 . 10/3/2008
good god!that was so funny can't wait to read more
Genato chapter 9 . 10/1/2008
thank god you finally updated!

love cian and kate together. i laughed a lot in this fic. :)
tickle-me-pretty15 chapter 9 . 9/27/2008
This story is just too cute for words. I hope you continue it because the last time i read it you only had three chapters up and i thought you had given up writing it. I know how hard sometimes it is to update so keepup the great work.

Demeterr chapter 9 . 9/19/2008
Ah what a hilarious story. Had to hold back my laughter (since when you laugh infront of a computer... people always give you weird looks) . Anyways... cliffe ending. I look forward to the next chapter.
cherrypiesizzle chapter 2 . 9/16/2008
This story is different from your other ones. It's my favourite one. x)
Lexgendary chapter 8 . 9/14/2008
Hello Maeven,

Seeing your update on this story filled me with joy, I love Unfinished Business very much. The plot is moving at a gradual speed and that's fine because I know you'll have something amazing install for us readers soon enough.

Glad to say that you hardly have any type errors, which is great of course because I seem to spot them out a lot in other fictions on the website.

Hoping you would update very soon and I've always loved the name "Cian" it's very lovely.

Take care and I'll see you around!
Tetelestai chapter 9 . 9/13/2008

I'm not sure if anyone else brought this up, but "the hair on the black as his neck standing up" should probably be the 'back' of his neck standing up.
N.M.E chapter 9 . 9/13/2008
WOW! I love this! This is so different! Kaetlyn's character is very realistic. She is one good protagonist. Update soon.
meme chapter 9 . 9/2/2008
loved it. congrats on the award. you definitely deserved it. looking forward to the next update~~
SlrMagica chapter 9 . 8/31/2008
Hahaha, your story is great! *Hilarious* and with a plot/themes I haven't read before (then again, I don't read many ghost stories). Really hope you keep updating!
p.kuma-san chapter 9 . 8/30/2008
awesome story! very well written, and it kept me laughing through the whole thing! hope to see the next chapter up soon!
Serolina chapter 9 . 8/26/2008
Nothing like an exhilarating game of tag! I think it would have ended up being quite funny if he Had pinned her down...he hehe. Can't Wait to find out what happens next!
zoule chapter 9 . 8/26/2008
Uh-oh, spaghetti-O. Someone's in trouble *nods knowingly*
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