Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh... Ooh is it me or do I sense that our Cian has a little something for Kaetlyn? *waggles eyebrows* gulistanlik |
![]() ![]() Ahh, awesome story. Please keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story more and more. I love the concept. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a terrible place to end the chapter! (Okay, it's a good place, it's just rough when the next chapter isn't up to satisfy my curiosity. Livi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ,and congratulations on the SKoW award. Definitely well-deserved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snicker* Ah, this story really makes me laugh. Good work. I like the wording you use. It's really flow-y, and goes together well. If that makes sense... But anyway. The way you have a humorous scene suddenly become dangerous and life-threatening is truly awesome. Really makes it a shock when Kaetlyn and Cian are bickering in good humor and then Kaetlyn's about to become a ghost-corpse(if something like that exists...)with no warning, like with the TV scene. And, ha! You just explained the Ring! Mucho awesome. Keep going. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats in the SKoW awards! That's great! This chapter was funny- especially the beginning, when she "exploded" the wineglass. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! finally, some action! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im sure you get this from everyone, but update more often! my heart skips a beat whenever i see the story alert in my inbox! love it, love the growing relationship between the two and everything. please grant my humble wishes and update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How vcould you just end the chapter with this cliffhanger? ur so evil! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great plot . not the biggest fan in terms of the whacky names or rhetoric tho . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... red eyes? I can see why she'd be nervous, especially with the impeccable timing of his... though maybe Cian 'called' him or something? Will be interesting to see... later... when it's not really late... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Silly girl should have realised! :D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter. congrats on SKOW :) |