Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I tried to imagine Kaetlyn glowing pink, and all I could think of was a pink-tinted translucent orb of glowing nothingness. Which I guess isn't quite right. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I wonder who pushed it. anyway, can't wait to read more. It was funny that he was hunting her lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapterness! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great chapter. I really didn't see that coming. It seems like Cian has gotten a little more flirty in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was an epic update. please please PLEASE write again soon i cant wait to read more D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! I can't wait to see where this is going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far this has been very intresting, I would like to read more. How do you pronounce Cian? |
![]() ![]() ![]() L-O-L! AH! You captured me from the very begging and this chapter was so funny and CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, good story! alittle wacked, but still good! I actually heard about this story from SKOW! so yeah! Just a suggestion, but maybe you should put the site for voting on your profile! that way readers would know how to vote! Anyways, :K Bloodfeeder |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i wonder how he can see her ... i bet he IS like that kid from the sixth sense who sees ghost all the time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol the ending of the first chapter always makes me laugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story! I really am enjoying Kaetlyn's attitude, but you've probably heard that over a hundred times already. It's an interesting story...I hope she gets ahold of her powers soon. Keep up the great work! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a sweet ending! I love the whole "The Ring"-esque part. Until you explained, I was like, woah, The Ring is real? Anyways, funny, and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny chapter! I don't much like Haden yet, but still he's quite funny. Especially his interactions with Cian. Hope to see more of the two! |