Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I remember this story from ages ago! It's very good. _ Love the reference to The Ring in this chapter. Livi |
![]() ![]() ![]() the summary was nough to grab my attention...good going... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez. Well, let me just start out by saying that you definietly deserved the Most Humorous award. I was seriously laughing out loud at a lot of the scenes... it's a good thing I'm in the privacy of my own room or I'm sure I'd be getting some weird stares from people. I really enjoy Kae's character. She's hilarious. Quite a match for Cian. He makes me smile.. I think if he was like, real, and I went to school with him then I could see myself falling for him. [But uh, then again I can see myself falling for a lot of the leading proagonist male characters] Well your updates seem to be quite sporadic, but I'll be hoping for one soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's rather odd that the hot guy sounds a little gay? But they are so cute together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just started reading this story.. and i already love it! its so cute ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omigoodess! I just discovered this story, and read what you have so far in one sitting. I LOVED the first chapter. THe ending of it was hilarious, and I definetly wasn't expecting that she was going to be killed by the girl falling. I hope you will update this story soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is a really great story, i had it on chapter updates but never read it..until TODAY (all at once wo). then i realised i love it and now urge you to please write quickly and update soon. SON. |
![]() ![]() Does this mean I don't have to wait another few years for an update? I can't remember how long ago I started this, but at the time I thought you gave it up...and now looky here, 4 or 5 updates? Glad I found it again! I'd like to hope to see another update will be around soon, please don't break my heart...it's been broken before. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story, it's really funny. I love POD by the way. The story's really imaginative without being trippy which I love. So I'll be hoping for an update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad so many of my favorite authors have been nominated for SKOW! Congrats and good luck. Funny chpapter - I like The Ring reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes you're one heck of a crappy author. *narrows eyes menacingly* D Oh goody, loved this chapter and is it bad that I really like Haden's character? Keep up the good work. I wonder what'll happen in the next chappie! gulistanlik |
![]() ![]() haha was the missing tape thing a reference to The Ring?i thought that was pretty funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool chap :) i hope you finish the story! |
![]() ![]() i absolutely loved that. i'm sorry - i'm not leaving a very good impression by just gushing & not being helpful but oh my god i can't help it. haha. i promise - the site i've told you about does not have me running around gushing everywhere. because that would, plainly, suck. really, when you strip your work down to its core - you're one of the top authors on this site. i think you have been from day one. i just - thanks for continuing with this fic regardless of what happened with ff. & gl with skow! that category is shaping up to be a really amazing one this round. (pst - i LOVE cian. & i think kaetlyn is settling down into a "character" really well. it still throws me that she has (a variation of) my name. but in a way, it's really cool.) -kait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, they slept next to each other. Oh and I nominated you lol. Hope you update soon! |