Reviews for Unfinished Business
Liviania chapter 8 . 8/1/2008
I remember this story from ages ago! It's very good. _ Love the reference to The Ring in this chapter.

a beginner chapter 8 . 7/21/2008
the summary was nough to grab my attention...good going...
shesabeautyx chapter 8 . 7/17/2008
Geez. Well, let me just start out by saying that you definietly deserved the Most Humorous award. I was seriously laughing out loud at a lot of the scenes... it's a good thing I'm in the privacy of my own room or I'm sure I'd be getting some weird stares from people.

I really enjoy Kae's character. She's hilarious. Quite a match for Cian. He makes me smile.. I think if he was like, real, and I went to school with him then I could see myself falling for him.

[But uh, then again I can see myself falling for a lot of the leading proagonist male characters]

Well your updates seem to be quite sporadic, but I'll be hoping for one soon :)
Undecided.And.Confused chapter 8 . 7/17/2008
It's rather odd that the hot guy sounds a little gay? But they are so cute together!
x3life chapter 8 . 7/17/2008
i just started reading this story..

and i already love it!

its so cute )
ValSilph chapter 8 . 7/16/2008
Omigoodess! I just discovered this story, and read what you have so far in one sitting. I LOVED the first chapter. THe ending of it was hilarious, and I definetly wasn't expecting that she was going to be killed by the girl falling. I hope you will update this story soon!
she gets skills from the pills chapter 8 . 7/12/2008
oh this is a really great story, i had it on chapter updates but never read it..until TODAY (all at once wo). then i realised i love it and now urge you to please write quickly and update soon. SON.
adda lee chapter 8 . 7/10/2008
Does this mean I don't have to wait another few years for an update? I can't remember how long ago I started this, but at the time I thought you gave it up...and now looky here, 4 or 5 updates? Glad I found it again! I'd like to hope to see another update will be around soon, please don't break my's been broken before. :(
Skinns-27 chapter 8 . 7/9/2008
I love the story, it's really funny. I love POD by the way. The story's really imaginative without being trippy which I love. So I'll be hoping for an update! _
zoule chapter 8 . 7/9/2008
I'm glad so many of my favorite authors have been nominated for SKOW! Congrats and good luck. Funny chpapter - I like The Ring reference
gulistala chapter 8 . 7/8/2008
Yes you're one heck of a crappy author. *narrows eyes menacingly* D

Oh goody, loved this chapter and is it bad that I really like Haden's character?

Keep up the good work. I wonder what'll happen in the next chappie!

justeatsomecake chapter 8 . 7/8/2008
haha was the missing tape thing a reference to The Ring?i thought that was pretty funny.
Essevera chapter 8 . 7/7/2008
cool chap :) i hope you finish the story!
aiur chapter 8 . 7/7/2008
i absolutely loved that. i'm sorry - i'm not leaving a very good impression by just gushing & not being helpful but oh my god i can't help it. haha. i promise - the site i've told you about does not have me running around gushing everywhere. because that would, plainly, suck. really, when you strip your work down to its core - you're one of the top authors on this site. i think you have been from day one. i just - thanks for continuing with this fic regardless of what happened with ff. & gl with skow! that category is shaping up to be a really amazing one this round.

(pst - i LOVE cian. & i think kaetlyn is settling down into a "character" really well. it still throws me that she has (a variation of) my name. but in a way, it's really cool.)

emotionless-stares chapter 8 . 7/7/2008
Aw, they slept next to each other. Oh and I nominated you lol. Hope you update soon!
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