Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha poor Cian... |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha that wsas funny! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, but are you going to finish the story? and it would be good if you added a recap before right before the chap begins |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Haden can control fire huh? Anyway, it's cute that his smile softened when she laughed. I'm so glad that you updated! Can't wait to read more about her lessons lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haden sounds pretty hot... literally. Too bad he ruined the couch. I wonder who he is. Glad you updated and can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. Cian is hilarious with his conspiring and all. I'm not sure if I like Haden or not. He does seem like an interesting character though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... an update.. i |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just wondering if I beg and plead and tell you how wonderful you are, if you won't wait A YEAR before updating this again. Pretty pretty please? |
![]() ![]() cutee |
![]() ![]() This story is just...awesome. Kaetlyn's a riot and very believeable, Cian is developing into quite a multifaceted character, and with the mysterious Haden and the hilarious POD thrown in the mix, it's just a party. You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omigoosh! i always see this story around but never really gave much thought to it. but then one day. i decided to give it a go. and *GASP ITS REALLY GOOD! and then i read in your profile thing. is that you might not continue it. *GASP NO WAY! its a great story and you so totally SHOULD NOT abandon it. please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting! I hope you update sometime soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um... I don't know if you're still writing this, but I totally love it (especially the part about the fork), and think it's really funny. So, yeah. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great idea. its not too super natural, but its not to realistic or sterotypical. please update soon. love this story, really! |
![]() ![]() wow. this is one of those most original stories i've read here so far and you just crack me up all - the - time. please please update soon! |