Reviews for Unfinished Business
emilybh chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
hahahaha poor Cian...
MiseryLovedHer chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
haha that wsas funny!

update soon!
Essevera chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
nice chapter, but are you going to finish the story? and it would be good if you added a recap before right before the chap begins
emotionless-stares chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
So Haden can control fire huh? Anyway, it's cute that his smile softened when she laughed. I'm so glad that you updated! Can't wait to read more about her lessons lol.
Undecided.And.Confused chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
Haden sounds pretty hot... literally. Too bad he ruined the couch. I wonder who he is. Glad you updated and can't wait for more.
midnitefaeri chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
Haha. Cian is hilarious with his conspiring and all. I'm not sure if I like Haden or not. He does seem like an interesting character though.
abc123 chewy chapter 7 . 6/29/2008
wow... an update.. i
beccabrighteyes chapter 7 . 6/28/2008
I'm just wondering if I beg and plead and tell you how wonderful you are, if you won't wait A YEAR before updating this again. Pretty pretty please?
FamousOneLiners chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
Cortney chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
This story is just...awesome. Kaetlyn's a riot and very believeable, Cian is developing into quite a multifaceted character, and with the mysterious Haden and the hilarious POD thrown in the mix, it's just a party.

You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more!
TheGreenPrincess chapter 6 . 4/29/2008
omigoosh! i always see this story around but never really gave much thought to it. but then one day. i decided to give it a go. and *GASP ITS REALLY GOOD! and then i read in your profile thing. is that you might not continue it. *GASP NO WAY!

its a great story and you so totally SHOULD NOT abandon it.

please update!
into the black chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
Very interesting! I hope you update sometime soon.
fairies and snapple chapter 6 . 3/28/2008
Um... I don't know if you're still writing this, but I totally love it (especially the part about the fork), and think it's really funny. So, yeah. Please continue!
D-Mish chapter 6 . 3/22/2008
great idea.

its not too super natural, but its not to realistic or sterotypical.

please update soon.

love this story, really!
fan chapter 6 . 3/20/2008
wow. this is one of those most original stories i've read here so far and you just crack me up all - the - time. please please update soon!
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