Reviews for Unfinished Business
cherrypiesizzle chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
That new guy sounds hot. Lol I can't believe you updated either! But least, try to get another chapter out soon?
noriepie chapter 6 . 11/4/2007
i love this story, it's so original
cedroth chapter 6 . 11/3/2007
jennycraig10 chapter 6 . 11/3/2007
Good chapter for this story. Still, I'm hoping that you'll get inspired for Through Me because I am waiting on the edge of my seat to see what happens! Hope you don't feel too overwhelmed. Just a suggestion, have you ever thought about collaborating with someone? Maybe that would help ease the writer's block since you can work with someone and brainstorm?
Essevera chapter 6 . 11/3/2007
I like the story very much. Did you rewrite this?
Undecided.And.Confused chapter 6 . 11/3/2007
I wasn't sure if I should read this story mostly because Through Me hasn't been updated for like a year! Sorry. But then I saw that this story got updated and I was bored and avoiding homework, so hey why not?

Kaetlyn is kind of strange, the way she died was definetly weird, I think that the suicidal girl would have died too. You never expect to die that way... How long was she been a ghost before she met Cian? How did he hold his laughter for so long? And why didn't people react when he was talking and grabbing at air, since no one else can see her?

I can't believe she fell for the whole argument with clown. What I think is the funniest thing ever: Prince of Darkness is a clown! LOL.

How did she end up on the roof top did she pass through the ceiling, or did she just go up there?

Ha! It seems there's going to be a love triangle! Although not much because Cian is a human, so he's out. But now this cute ghost guy comes along! Thehehe. How come the other ghosts were so ugly?

I like this story!
jekodama chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA! Oh, God, that was GREAT! Her death reminded me of a TV series named "Dead like me" (the lead character, Georgia, was killed by a toilet, lol!).

Cian is hot (But you didn't need me to tell you THAT! XD). I can't see the use of a giant fork in a battle, I just can't... even a gunsling could be more useful than a fork... Or a baseball bat, but a fork? LOL!

So Kae is a weapon? Interesting... The recruiting system of the evil ghosts reminded me of another TV series, Ghost Whisperer... There was this evil guy named Romano, who sort of convinced ghosts to go with him, and by absorbing them he became stronger... I don't remember exactly, but it was something like that.

POD? that was just plain hilarious! I'll have you know that I'm very much afraid of clowns, it's ridiculous! It's a phobia, my heart rate increases, I start sweating, I get all queasy and dizzy... I hate them. You think I liked my friends' parties when I was a little girl? think again!

Kae is hilarious, hilarious, hilarius... I don't have anymore words to express what I think about her. She's awesome.

I truly hope you get rid of stupid writer's block and continue working on Through Me, I miss those characters a lot. Until then, take care and have fun, those are the keys of being happy!

Until the next review!
CharlyB chapter 6 . 11/2/2007
It's been awhile, but this was a great update. We have an intriguing new character! Thanks for the new chapter, I hope your inspiration gets another one out soon!
Wallpaper-Patterns chapter 6 . 11/2/2007
Yay! I'm glad that you managed to churn out Chapter Six, and very happy to hear that you're still trying because I'm definately sticking around.

Your character of Kae is so very very lovable, and I can certainly understand the Cian when he can't stop laughing at her. Also, I find your plot really original and engaging and hilariously funny ) It's really great to see such well written unique works.

Hope you find your inspiration soon!
goodshirt chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
OMG YES! You updated Unfinished Business! XD I am extremely happy, it's such a great story! Thank you very much for updating and i hope your writers block disappears. And good luck with your exams (I, too am doing mine shortly).
emotionless-stares chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
lol cool a new character. Anyway, I can always count on this story to make me laugh in every chapter. Hope you update soon! lol even though with your lack of motivation
emotionless-stares chapter 5 . 11/1/2007
aw...Cian is so nice. They're so cute together
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
Wow. This is really good. I love it. I wonder who that bloke was that brought her back to the ground. Hm...I hope you update soon. It's awesome. So, UPDATE!
emotionless-stares chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
lol yay! She works for them now and lol the prince of darkness is a clown
emotionless-stares chapter 3 . 11/1/2007
lol he kept insisting that it was a pitchfork
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