Reviews for Unfinished Business
emotionless-stares chapter 2 . 11/1/2007
lol they're high tech now.
emotionless-stares chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
HA! He can see her! Lol this story is good. Can't wait to read more
The Killer Is Me chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
Quite amusing. I'm enjoying this )
Lovediamond15 chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
wow i love it, who's the guy at the end *squints and thinks* its funny, i hope u manage the next chapter ok, i'd hate for this story to stop, its such a great idea :) well, update when u can :D
zoule chapter 6 . 11/1/2007
I'm so happy you updated this story. It's just too cute to put on hiatus or leave unfinished!
lanowen chapter 5 . 10/19/2007
HEY! I love your story! I hope you would continue it soon cause I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. especially between Kae and Cian. It's really interesting and hilarious story. WHOO! Glad I clicked on it! hehe godd luck on 'through me'!
ThisAccountWantsToBeDeleted chapter 5 . 9/28/2007
This is so cool! The story is original and great. I'm loving it already, all the characters are so funny. I love how Kaetlyn calls the POD a clown... (laughs)

Hope this comes off hiatus soon! I'd love to read more.
Wallpaper-Patterns chapter 5 . 9/23/2007
Just so you know, I found this story refreshingly original, and I do hope that you find it in you to continue. Great job!
druggieaddict chapter 5 . 9/7/2007
Hi, I think the story is proceeding quite well, but would be better if you could cut out a little of all the technology/ghost-busting/revenge kinda stuff. Good job, though (:
xXReader.Desu.YoXx chapter 5 . 8/11/2007
kept me laughing.
ebonydragon chapter 5 . 8/9/2007
Great story you have going on here! Update soon!
fatso17 chapter 5 . 7/23/2007
Dear lord... why isn't this superb story updated yet?

wait.. you're a med student. AH! that's so cool! you're studing medicine and yet you can write so well. hang on. med students ARE smart, they have to be good at all subjects including english. so it shouldn't be a surprise that you're good right? AHA! i have discovered your secret! mwahahahha...

... i'm not strange *cough* no, not at all. *cough*

(sorry it you're shuddering with the lack of punctuation and horrid language. some of us are just not half (or 1%) as good as you)
earlkgm chapter 5 . 6/30/2007
omg! this story is AWESOME! Im already in love with it. lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
theGreyPebble chapter 5 . 6/23/2007


I like this story... but it's too short (so far).

Their conversations are VERY funny... i really like this.

Reminds me of meg cabot's mediator series. only funnier and less... tacky.
A Deep Secret chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
this story is really good. Why did you stop writting it. i noticed that you havent updated since August 15, 2005. i think its really interesting. im keeping this story on my fav's list just incase there is more to the story D.
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