Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lol they're high tech now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! He can see her! Lol this story is good. Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite amusing. I'm enjoying this ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i love it, who's the guy at the end *squints and thinks* its funny, i hope u manage the next chapter ok, i'd hate for this story to stop, its such a great idea :) well, update when u can :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy you updated this story. It's just too cute to put on hiatus or leave unfinished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY! I love your story! I hope you would continue it soon cause I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. especially between Kae and Cian. It's really interesting and hilarious story. WHOO! Glad I clicked on it! hehe godd luck on 'through me'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool! The story is original and great. I'm loving it already, all the characters are so funny. I love how Kaetlyn calls the POD a clown... (laughs) Hope this comes off hiatus soon! I'd love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so you know, I found this story refreshingly original, and I do hope that you find it in you to continue. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I think the story is proceeding quite well, but would be better if you could cut out a little of all the technology/ghost-busting/revenge kinda stuff. Good job, though (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() kept me laughing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story you have going on here! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear lord... why isn't this superb story updated yet? wait.. you're a med student. AH! that's so cool! you're studing medicine and yet you can write so well. hang on. med students ARE smart, they have to be good at all subjects including english. so it shouldn't be a surprise that you're good right? AHA! i have discovered your secret! mwahahahha... ... i'm not strange *cough* no, not at all. *cough* (sorry it you're shuddering with the lack of punctuation and horrid language. some of us are just not half (or 1%) as good as you) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! this story is AWESOME! Im already in love with it. lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NU! CONTINUE! I like this story... but it's too short (so far). Their conversations are VERY funny... i really like this. Reminds me of meg cabot's mediator series. only funnier and less... tacky. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really good. Why did you stop writting it. i noticed that you havent updated since August 15, 2005. i think its really interesting. im keeping this story on my fav's list just incase there is more to the story D. |