Reviews for Unfinished Business
MB Rumpf chapter 5 . 5/21/2006
Kootoes to you on your finished story, Will is a smexy beast

I'm loving the plot line on this book too. Great job, update or else i will kidnap Will and hold him as my sex slave
Tis the Air I Breathe chapter 5 . 5/21/2006
I really love this plot line! Its so funny, the way she died. I can't wait for the next chapter!
boogalaga chapter 5 . 5/16/2006
Awesome. I get such a kick out of this thing.

I eagerly await your next chapter.
rema chapter 5 . 5/10/2006
i think, wait no it is a wicked story so far and i want to know what happens NEXT! so please update soon.
TheShizno chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
lol, the beginning was very ironic(and a bit confusing until it was explained). So far so good, but then, all I've read was 1 chapter, but false facades was good, and i'm expecting this to be as good...long review...ya.
Sheets chapter 5 . 3/20/2006
very good so far. wil read rest of chapter later.
minime chapter 5 . 3/18/2006
omeegee! this is so good! I can't believe this story is on hiatus! no!Say it isn't so! lol well yea *bug* *bug* hope u can get into this story again! -minime-
PridefulShame chapter 5 . 3/13/2006
This is a great story, really funny. Please update soon!
Rhea Larkin chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
I love your originality and humor. You really make me laugh, I love it. I also like how you've modernized (and parodized) the whole supernatural aspect of the story. It's too bad you've lost inspiration for it. I hope you get it back soon! It's wonderful! Good luck, and happy writing! :)
For What Its Worth chapter 5 . 3/1/2006
ROFL! this story is hilarious. i cant wait to read more. what will she do next?
SLy chapter 5 . 2/17/2006

this is a great story... like what everyone else says

elavndrc chapter 5 . 2/12/2006
Wow this story is so different and for a ghost story it's not really scary..besidess POD the clown anyways haha.. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Kait Dunn chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
So...that's basically the worst way to die. o-o
Slightly Obsessive chapter 5 . 2/2/2006
Love it! Very original and well written!
mashmellow chapter 5 . 1/31/2006
heyo!u MUST update!uno.. this is a bit like the anime bleach... haf u heard of it? if not u should check it out.. u'll love it!
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