Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good so far. I feel so bad for Kaetlyn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...update...plz... for me? for Kaetlyn... for Cian? plz? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really hoping that you will get around to updating this cuz I've decided I really like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, I have to laugh, hehe, baddie ghosts... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Big meanie, lol, it's good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, which is odd since i don't usually read the supernatural stuff |
![]() ![]() Just a quick question, if Cian clapped his hands just at the end of this chapter, wouldn't the lights have gone out? I think it's rather too early for me to throw out a lot of criticsm, (ack, spelled that wrong) but I'll give this: Kaetlyn has a very strong personality. The characters are very clear, but a little bit of description could be added. There's a lot of dialogue, but it just sits there. What do they do when they say it? How do they say it? That sort of thing. Just think about it. ~Shadow |
![]() ![]() Now that you finished False Facades, will you please update this story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story! When are you gonna add another chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story. Adds a fun twist. Ghostbuster and Ghost. LOL. cute... very nice!plz update and headed into favorites |
![]() ![]() love it plz keep going! and if ure felling like plz more fluff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, forking. Gosh, this story is hilarious. Livi |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story already! The clown POD was so funny! Update ASAP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! When the boy says "yeah" like that... it was hysterically funny. Can't wait to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() are u gonna update soon...please update. |