Reviews for Unfinished Business
The name's Roz chapter 5 . 1/22/2006
This story is really good so far. I feel so bad for Kaetlyn!
Nolaknowsmyname chapter 5 . 1/18/2006
Plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...update...plz... for me? for Kaetlyn... for Cian? plz?
Nolaknowsmyname chapter 4 . 1/18/2006
I'm really hoping that you will get around to updating this cuz I've decided I really like it.
Nolaknowsmyname chapter 3 . 1/18/2006
Sorry, I have to laugh, hehe, baddie ghosts...
Nolaknowsmyname chapter 2 . 1/18/2006
Big meanie, lol, it's good.
Nolaknowsmyname chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
I like this story, which is odd since i don't usually read the supernatural stuff
Shadow YellowEyes chapter 5 . 1/16/2006
Just a quick question, if Cian clapped his hands just at the end of this chapter, wouldn't the lights have gone out?

I think it's rather too early for me to throw out a lot of criticsm, (ack, spelled that wrong) but I'll give this: Kaetlyn has a very strong personality. The characters are very clear, but a little bit of description could be added. There's a lot of dialogue, but it just sits there. What do they do when they say it? How do they say it? That sort of thing. Just think about it. ~Shadow
anon chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
Now that you finished False Facades, will you please update this story. :)
noli chapter 5 . 1/8/2006
I'm loving this story! When are you gonna add another chapter!
Sweet Sarcasm chapter 5 . 1/7/2006
this story. Adds a fun twist. Ghostbuster and Ghost. LOL. cute... very nice!plz update and headed into favorites
someone that hasent made an account yet chapter 5 . 1/7/2006
love it plz keep going! and if ure felling like plz more fluff!
Liviania chapter 5 . 12/29/2005
Yes, forking. Gosh, this story is hilarious.

Krystal Sunshine chapter 5 . 12/29/2005
I'm loving this story already! The clown POD was so funny! Update ASAP.
Krystal Sunshine chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
This is great! When the boy says "yeah" like that... it was hysterically funny. Can't wait to keep reading!
BetweenLife chapter 5 . 12/25/2005
are u gonna update soon...please update.
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