Reviews for Unfinished Business
Aimless Creation chapter 5 . 12/24/2005
CoolI wanna fly...lolPlease continue!
Aimless Creation chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
kay so, before I read the rest of your story i'd like to say WOWThis is awesome!
kittycatluv chapter 5 . 12/17/2005
oh wow, this is a quite an interesting story...keep up the good work _
broken fedora 2 lazi 2 sign in chapter 5 . 12/15/2005
HOOLY CRAP! um.. yeah... wow.. good stoay, i mean nnicce. lol. okay, you SERSIOLY can't cut it off their, "what do you think about flying?" FLYING ROCKS! i've always wanted to fly,... but never had the chance, you know? oh well, wicked writing, and NICE plot, verying intesting, and if u dont update the carrots will come

O... boo. pah i suck at being spooky.
daphnegray78 chapter 5 . 12/12/2005
Wow. I really like this! It's so much better than the normal ghost stories. I can't wait for the next chapter!

MizSphinx chapter 1 . 12/9/2005



No seriously...this've never been speechless before but darn it I am now! Humorous would be an understatement to this story! I especially liked the part when the girl took away the microphone: "I'll live on! I'll live on!"

Oh and the part where she's talking to him and at the end he answers her. Man, you got my blood sugar on high and yet I'm gonna read on!

Eva Da Crazie One,

Mentally Malfunctioned,

Lexgendary chapter 5 . 12/8/2005
Hey! I'm very pleased with your chapter it's wonderful and so cute - can't wait for more when Cian start teaching Kae how to combat! Would be interesting Take care of yourself and write soon!
C. X. Blackfeather chapter 5 . 12/1/2005
Interesting. I really, really liked the first chapter, and I still like the conversations - they're funny. Your plot is...weird, but I guess I'll find out more later on.

Haha, I just can't get over how the first chapter ended.
Mechanical Dolls chapter 5 . 11/22/2005
Somehow, my browser won't let me read the third chapter, so I kinda skipped a lot. :(

But I love the story! It's awesome! Hehehe, I love all that Prince of Darkness thingy too. I mean, a clown? Wtf?

Hm... actually, it might be a good idea..

But anyway, great story! Update!

Isabella K Earnshaw chapter 5 . 11/13/2005
Please Please Please please please please please please UPDATE!
koriko chapter 5 . 11/12/2005
yay! u updated! the new chapter's AWESOME! plz update again soon!
wishfullthinker chapter 5 . 11/12/2005
:) It's really funny. Keep it up!
Girl-Predictable chapter 5 . 11/7/2005
I love you!...but I would love you more if you updated! :D
dreamingmaggie chapter 5 . 11/6/2005
"She – she was going to fork us too –"

"Oh my. Not forking you!"

LMAO...that kept me laughing for a while )

awesome work! i can wait for an update!
kayttea chapter 5 . 11/5/2005
wow. flying? you left us there? NO! WHY! P I really love this story. I can easily imagine it as an awesome movie as well. Please, please, please, please, please update? I love it! Yeah! Ok... I'm gonna shut up now. ) GREAT story. please continue it! D
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