Reviews for Unfinished Business
Yesterday's Secrets chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
Lol. I had never thought that Cian would be this all-laughing kind of guy. XD I thought that he would be kinda stoic because of his job and all. XD Apparently, I was wrong. HAHA.

Eep. The clown person doesn't look anything like a 'prince of darkness'. o_o It's so the opposite. XD but he and Cian sure have a nice relationship. *nod nod*

Wait, Blake? Is that Cian's nickname or what? XD Sorry; kinda confused here. XD

OH. And I actually cracked up with that trident part! Seriously. Kaetlyn is so hilarious! And so does Cian! They are oh so perfect for each other. They have this great chemistry between them. :)

Okay, enough ramblings. Off to the next chapter!

Much Love,

Hazel
foreigndelight chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
oh GOD

dont leave there, please!

it was so awesome...
ImightBeCrazyforYou chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ITS BEEN LIKE FOUR YEARS AND I WAS SADDEN WHEN I REALIZED IT WAS ONLY 9 CHAPTERS! YOUR A REALLY GOOD AUTHOR, ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND WRITING IN ALL CAPS IS SERIOUS IMPROVEMENT FOR ME! I HOPE THAT WHEN YOU SEE THIS THAT YOU WILL BE IMMEDIATELY INSPIRED TO FINISH THE STORY! :D UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
ImightBeCrazyforYou chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Oh gosh, i love this story! Its interesting and funny to the point where i laugh out loud and people around are like WTF? I loved the part where she just talks to a random guy who can actually see her! Im gonna go now and read the rest of your story then review again when im done ;)
effortless-inelegance chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
AAAAHHH! Really? You just stopped? And at the most suspenseful part, too! Okay, so, I know you haven't updated this for three/four years, but... please! I HAVE to know what happens! By the way, I'm favoriting this story. And putting it on my alert in the remote chance that you will update! (PLEEEAAAASE)
effortless-inelegance chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Wow. Very well thought out explanations and reasons and all that. I love your originality!
effortless-inelegance chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
OH. MY. GOSH! I love this! This story is super original and you're an amazing writer! Good descriptions, hooker opening chapter... I am SO reading on!
moscalover chapter 9 . 1/4/2012
You must continue! This story is amazing, I read 3 of your stories and they're all great, please update :D
ColourCascade chapter 9 . 10/20/2011
I noticed you havn't updated in ages but please do sometime soon cos this story is awesome :)
Whatsoever chapter 9 . 9/26/2011
I love this! Why oh WHY aren't you updating!
Faye-san chapter 9 . 7/22/2011
I miss you. Please come back. Wants to know who took Kae- ok so I know who took her but I want to know who saves her! Please. I heart you come back!
Eva Lilac chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
This cliffhanger would be so GOOD if I didn't want to know what happens so BADLY. :) Love the storyline so far.
Jade chapter 9 . 7/7/2011
I'm in love with this story :)

I wish you'd bring it back, it feels like unfinished business (get it? haahaa.. lame i know)

The chemistry between Kaetlyn and Cian is amazing, not to mention that the storyline itself is unlike anything I've read before. It's original and funny and to be honest I'd be gutted if you did'nt continue cuz it really is it great story.

Jade

xoxo

TEAM KAETLYN AND CIAN! :)
BrightFullMoon chapter 9 . 6/18/2011
This story is so good! I love how original and creative it is. I would encourage you to come back to this story and update so I know what happens, but I also know what it's like to come back to a story after such a long time. Been there, done that lol. But If you do decided to put up another chapter, I'm most certainly gonna read it. So fantastic!
thedoggydog2 chapter 9 . 6/12/2011
Awesome story!

Update soon!
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