That was a great new story!

I like how you ended the chapter...giving it a big cliffhanger thingy...

I also liked how you gave the story a twist, which made it really entertaining...

Anyways...Good work...it was a kewl story _

Haha! I love the ending and how she rambled on and on about stuff, not think he could hear her. XD Poor girl, probably gonna die (again!) of embarrassment!

I'm going to be paranoid about walking under buildings now...x_x Update soon! And don't give up on False Facades! (No telling how many people will tell you that P)

this is a great story idea! i love it! srry i didnt read it earlier...was in trouble las nite heh...update soon n dont give up on ur other story! ill b really sad if so! :(

DreamNightmare

Cool Story! D

Wow! I've been waiting to read the next chapter of "False Facades", so I decided to browse and see if you had any more stories up. To my surprise, I found this one, and, wow! I hope you get it done quickly, cause it's uber awesome, and I already love it!

Wow... this is a really interesting start - and a really interesting idea. I like it - alot! Anyway, I hope you continue, cos this is really good, ver interesting, and very well written - great job!

Wonderful! Pure genious...i laughed really hard at the end. What a perfect response...please UPDATE SOON!

When I read the first paragraph or so, I was horrified! I 'd thought you'd gone from excellent stories such as False Facades, to melodramatic stories...

Boy was I wrong.

This is great! It was quite hilarious at the end...

Keep on writing, and hurry on up with the updates...

hey, that was a good story. I agree that it seems odd that a young guy has a career that would need so much experience. But good, over all, I enjoyed it.

A very interesting first chapter; two minutes into the story and there's already a twist! Yep, that's the way to keep readers wanting more. I like the satirizing of the news reporter and all the people who collectively gasped. I can't quite imagine a young guy being an exorcist though, I mean, what an aspiration! That sure beats being a policeman. There were some grammatical errors that I caught, but they were sparse. Extensive vocabulary, but not riduculously peppered with a string of unpronounceable words when "and" would do. On the whole, an entertaining start. I look forward to reading more!

Oh, my gosh. That was funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what she is going to do next. Please update soon. Thanks.

I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S GREAT! i really like the storyline too...and wow...you're a great writer! i love this story!

UPDATE SOON!

Chelsea

Nice chapter. I was wondering why it's rated G though...

OMG! u gotta update now! i mean, this is a great beginnig for a great story...update now! i luv this...