Reviews for Just A Twin
Jenina chapter 18 . 4/25/2004
Did you know that you are one of my most favorite authors in the whole FictionPress site? I have two [or three] of your stories in my favorites list, and you're on author alert, and favorite authors. Hehe. It's hilariously funny and, unlike most funny stories, it actually has a plot! and a damn good one, at that! Three cheers for you!
*Fire Daimone
SilentBlueRose chapter 18 . 4/21/2004
Aww... She misses her mom. That's sad. And Amber's a dork.
Good chap, please update soon!
Sani chapter 18 . 4/21/2004
I love Ella Enchanted too! I really want to see the movie too!
Aharah Musici chapter 18 . 4/20/2004
This is just too damn funny, the chapters are horridly shortand slightly confusing with the constant pov change... But other than that it has a good enough plot line that i might as well read it as a just for fun thingamajig...
You Need More Flair chapter 18 . 4/20/2004
I resent that comment about the "Wicked Witch"...
AryaWinds chapter 18 . 4/20/2004
hey, i saw that movie! it wasn't as good as the book tho...*cry* and i didn't really like it. I DO like the book, tho...and i also like ur story as well. this story is really good, so please update soon!
Life Love Sanity chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
ew *wrinkles nose* I don't like whats-her-face, she's like the evil stepmother in cinderella! hehe but its great! I especially like Dymien! *hehe* but its great so please write more! Love it as always,
~Life, Love Sanity
Arialla chapter 17 . 4/9/2004
Aww, sweet! Dymien is so cool. Great job, although this chapter is really short *pout*. But it’ll be okay if you update again really soon!
~ Aria
You Need More Flair chapter 17 . 4/8/2004
And write more soon...
SilentBlueRose chapter 17 . 4/8/2004
Aww... Dymien's so sweet...
Eep... That lady sounds freaky... Poofy hair and silver skirts, eh? Scary.
I like the chapter! I don't really get the title though...
Update soon!
Minyaithwen chapter 16 . 4/4/2004
Hey hey! I can't believe that you're making Julian move away. It's just not fair. It's so mean. but you're still doing a geat job on this story! Please update soon so that you can destract me form my broing Bio hw again. ::wink:: Toodles!
AryaWinds chapter 16 . 3/28/2004
Hey, great job! This story's pretty good! Just a little tip, though: don't make Chyler perfect. Not that I'm saying that's bad, cuz she's cool, but don't make Claidi the really unreasonable one and everything. Yeah. Well, you could ignore this if you wanted, but it was just a little suggestion. Your writing is really good: Dymien is awesome, Julian seems like a good bf, Tori is the coolest, and...yeah. Great job!
PS. I'm betting that 'Me' and 'The Frappin' Idiot' are one and the same person. Otherwise, what reason would 'Me' have to flame you?
PS 2. Ignore the flamers. Ur doing great. Keep it up!
Misodity chapter 16 . 3/27/2004
sounding good. :)
HeresToYou and your Laziness chapter 16 . 3/27/2004
No more drama... Can't they have a calm day? LOL!
My Works 87 chapter 16 . 3/27/2004
Hm...flamers do suck. Especially since they're so TACTLESS, that they can't put their criticism in a constructive way. They complain about the author's writing sucking. But guess what? To put things so rudely in a review means they suck at writing too! Heh heh. But yeah. Hmm...I'm liking the other sister's side of the story a little better. I felt that I didn't really get to know Julian that well, so it was hard for me to care about their relationship as much as Dymien. (Is that how it's spelled) But anyways, I really like your dialogue because I think it's witty and very hip. So good job with that. I do think you could add more detail into the story, like scenary/emotions/inner dialogue. No that doesn't mean the charactesr have to talk to themselves. Heh heh. It's usually safer to have too much description than not enough, because it's unlikely that you'd have too much description. I mean. You REALLY have to ramble on to be that way. So good luck kiddo!
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