|Reviews for The Cage of Happenings|
| Tenika D chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Wow . . . out of all of your other pieces, I think this has one of your best ending stanza so far. Very well put, and very compelling. It would be interesting to see this turned into a story.
| Ian chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
WE. This is good, I only wish I was this good, *GLARES*
| Faylinn Smith chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
I agree with the other comments - the format is part of what makes this poem so cool. Plus, along with your attention to spelling and punctuation, etc., I can tell you like writing.
You have an awesome (for lack of a stronger adjective) way of saying things - lines like
Super glue my heart back,
might be found in a bad country song, but with the rest of the poem, it's... *breaks out thesaurus* ...stupefying? (That entire sentence is meant as a compliment, lol)
Anyway, great write, keep writing!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
crazy format like always i love it... great description altho i wouldnt have gotten it w/o the summary! great poem!
| Miamouse chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
OOh, lovely format, really accentuates the poem.
The last three lines are dark, a good ending for the poem as well. Very tight poem, too, nothing seems there for the sake of it.
I especially like, "it's show time. A strange sort of coffee pot."