Reviews for That girl
rapink93 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
wow that was so powerful! i loved it!
Nausikaa chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Wow, lots of tension in this poem. The last couple of lines really help to build up the suspense.
carbon chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
i'm stupified...i love it. it is so perfect. there's no way you could change anything else about it. you capture all the people who read your stuff and hold thier attention until you say what needs to be said...dont change!
vixxy chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
wow. that's awesome. amazing. major kudos. you deserve a penguin.
Enchantressofthestars chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
*Mysterious*, where'd u get the idea, it seems professional tho, like really professional. Ur a really good writer!
reikamae chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
Wow. I really like this one. You are very good at pulling the reader in and holding onto their attention by describing so well... continue on and I'll check back on you. Great job.