Reviews for Just a Son
K. Presson chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
It's good. So far you've got humor in it, and intregue. I'd like to see where you go with this. Please, continue. :o)
pieces chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
I'm not sure if you were aiming for a lot of humor, but this is one of the most comical stories I have ever come across, and you do an excellent job of keeping it in check. Fantastic work, update soon.

. . . And I think that the girl has a mysterious kind of an aura. It's charming, I'm intrigued.

Gabby
Teresa chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
Hi! Okay I came to read. This is *really* interesting. I just love the irony, and you're developing the character really well, especially early :) I think you should continue.
Maureen chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
I'm liking this. I'd like more, but only add to it if you fully intended to from the start.